For the love of God.......
Frankly speaking here, I've seen the past chapters and the new changes are well and done and you've got flash skills I'll give you that, but how in the world did you get dialy first place with such a horrendous story line.....
I mean it is just soo pointless. I don't know if your going for a DBZ type story line but if you really do intend to make up to chapter 10, at least make it something to enjoy watching rather than reading lines of useless texts.